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And suddenly it’s all align
A pretty pose in endless time
That seeks to make my mind twist
And grabs my heart, hand at my wrist
Like something long and lanky lean
That like a doll, sewn at the seams
Paints a portrait of her scene
And shows me something of her dreams

She colours words in black and white
Then shines upon them in a light
Of swirling greens and blues in time
Reflecting off her eyes

I cannot see and cannot find
The words that she paints with her mind
A poet that seems to make me feel
That all the words are real…
:iconmyvampyrenightshade:

Author's Comments

A gift for deviant ~Colormehappy19, who I would link you to, but I don't know how.

EDIT: =colormehappy19 :D GO VISIT HER she is the awesome~

I was thinking about a something today that made me think of how she has been reading my works and commenting and making me feel like my works are actually something good, and it make me think... and I just typed this up

I hope that it's something you'll like, hon.

-Kiley

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:iconcolormehappy19:
FOR ME?!? Oh my gosh, I love it! Normally I have so many words, and you just stole them. I quirked a brow at the title. Thank you so much! I really appreciate this. :]
:iconiloveitplz:
Oh, about the linking, it's : devcolormehappy19 : without spaces or... : iconcolormehappy19 : without spaces. Thank you so much! Gawwww.
:iconiloveyouplz:

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rain flow to the roots
rain drench my boots
rain douse the flame
rain forget this poet's name
:iconmyvampyrenightshade:
Yes for you! XD I titled it that, actually, to get a quirked brow reaction from you, so that makes me happy that I won on that one <cackles to self>

Oh, that's how you do that link thing, <3 I''ll fix it ^_^

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F - I - D - E - L - I - T - Y, do all love song turn out this way? and do you here me when i say... your in my heart, in my hand, round my neck
:iconcolormehappy19:
Lol, yeah, I guess you won.. this time. :XD:

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rain flow to the roots
rain drench my boots
rain douse the flame
rain forget this poet's name
:iconmyvampyrenightshade:
<Cackles evilly> my evil plan! it is complete!

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F - I - D - E - L - I - T - Y, do all love song turn out this way? and do you here me when i say... your in my heart, in my hand, round my neck
:iconcolormehappy19:
*lols* Epic win.

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rain flow to the roots
rain drench my boots
rain douse the flame
rain forget this poet's name
:iconmyvampyrenightshade:
x3 indeed <3

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F - I - D - E - L - I - T - Y, do all love song turn out this way? and do you here me when i say... your in my heart, in my hand, round my neck
:iconsirenseranade11:
I like it.

If you were to link =colormehappy19, you would put : devcolormehappy19 : but without the spaces around the colons.
:iconmyvampyrenightshade:
Thank you so much! for reading and for telling me how to do that >_>

xD

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F - I - D - E - L - I - T - Y, do all love song turn out this way? and do you here me when i say... your in my heart, in my hand, round my neck

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